Dogfood Haiku, tis one's old, but true
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Dogfood Haiku, tis one's old, but true| Tyler |
Posted: March 20, 2004 01:27 am
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The Dogfood Haiku[U]
My friend ate dog food By my brother he was forced Now my dog has beef Thank you, I'm Tyler - Goodnight. -------------------- |
    
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| Constance |
Posted: March 20, 2004 01:30 am
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lol.. that was hilarious!
reminds me of my childhood years ( no i wasn't the one that ate dog food) -------------------- \m/ (>.<) \m/ Peace, Rock On, and Fuck You! \m/ (>.<) \m/
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| Tyler |
Posted: March 20, 2004 01:44 am
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me neither
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| Constance |
Posted: March 20, 2004 02:14 am
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although i can not deny not trying it when i was like. 4yrs old.. or around that age area.. i tried doggy beef jerky. i mean damn. that shit looked like beef jerky.. i like beef jerky.. so.. i tried it.. hated it.. spit it out..
twas grodie -------------------- \m/ (>.<) \m/ Peace, Rock On, and Fuck You! \m/ (>.<) \m/
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| asher |
Posted: March 20, 2004 05:53 am
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Beer Haiku I am drinking beer I drink more beer than i should Beer belly i fear |
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| asher |
Posted: March 20, 2004 05:55 am
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Pigpen Haiku
I never clean up My room is a total mess I Dream of Jeanie |
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| Tyler |
Posted: March 20, 2004 09:22 am
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Schooltime Haiku
Chew on your pen Paul And learn why you rely on A cap in your ass. Cool Guys Smoldering in ash My car is faster than his Punch me in the face. UH OH before I knew it someone drank that last keg beer my cig was in it.  -------------------- |
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| Constance |
Posted: March 21, 2004 07:25 am
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hmm im not sure if this is a haiku cause i've never written one.. but here goes.. imma just wing it.. lol
just went to a show with corner stone and see thru now i am tired ((shrugs)) hmm  -------------------- \m/ (>.<) \m/ Peace, Rock On, and Fuck You! \m/ (>.<) \m/
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| Tyler |
 Posted: March 22, 2004 04:55 am
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Just when Johhny thought
he had Daniel for speeding Diarrhea knocked. -------------------- |
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| asher |
Posted: March 24, 2004 03:45 am
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just so you know Constance, a haiku is a japanese style of poetry where each line has a designated amount a syllables. the most common haiku is
5 syllables in the first line 7 in the second, and 5 in the third. you almost got it with yours, you need one more syllable in the last line. for example Constance likes to write haikus can be very strange Tyler's dog has beef |
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| Tyler |
Posted: March 24, 2004 04:38 am
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Actually, I think she tricked us with "Tired." (two syllables) Good job Constance!
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| Constance |
Posted: March 24, 2004 04:59 am
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really? yayness!!
thank you both for helping me understand a bit better.. hehe.. wow.. i learned sumthin new! \m/ 0 0 T ! *bows*  tyler and asher inspiring and thoughtful smarter am i now how bout that one.. *counts syllables* ((shrugs)) -------------------- \m/ (>.<) \m/ Peace, Rock On, and Fuck You! \m/ (>.<) \m/
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| Tyler |
Posted: March 25, 2004 05:42 pm
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Maybe more like this one:
Tyler and Asher intoxicated they are don't listen to them.  -------------------- |
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| Tyler |
Posted: March 25, 2004 08:02 pm
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I just had to sneeze
as she leaned in for a kiss where are you going?! -------------------- |
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| Constance |
Posted: March 25, 2004 09:53 pm
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haha w/ all the drinkin ya'll say u do.. i wouldn't doubt it -------------------- \m/ (>.<) \m/ Peace, Rock On, and Fuck You! \m/ (>.<) \m/
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